"There's a thing in my pocket" has to be some of the worst copywriting I've ever seen.
Posted by:Stan Lee on May 9, 2007 11:19 PM
Simple. Classy. Nice. @ Stan, I guess you wanted to say "copywriting that I've ever READ."
Posted by:Greg on May 10, 2007 7:02 PM
Underwhelming. Copy is bizarre and convoluted.
"And, it can let others feel what you've just been touched by."?
I still can't figure out what the hell that means. And what's up with the extraneous comma?
Ech.
Posted by:loulah blue on May 12, 2007 2:26 AM
Agree with Stan Lee, worst copywriting ever.
Posted by:melty on May 12, 2007 2:38 AM
Reminds me of that Prince lyric. "I've got a lion in my pocket and baby it's ready to roar".
Prince, managed, without the, superfluous, comma, though.
Posted by:Rob Hobson on May 14, 2007 7:51 PM
I though it was a paedophilia awareness campaign until I saw the call to action. Don't get it, poor art direction, crap copy. blah!
Posted by:joeyd345@aol.com on May 21, 2007 1:17 PM
"There's a thing in my pocket" has to be some of the worst copywriting I've ever seen.
Posted by:Stan Lee on May 9, 2007 11:19 PM
Simple. Classy. Nice.
@ Stan, I guess you wanted to say "copywriting that I've ever READ."
Posted by:Greg on May 10, 2007 7:02 PM
Underwhelming. Copy is bizarre and convoluted.
"And, it can let others feel what you've just been touched by."?
I still can't figure out what the hell that means. And what's up with the extraneous comma?
Ech.
Posted by:loulah blue on May 12, 2007 2:26 AM
Agree with Stan Lee, worst copywriting ever.
Posted by:melty on May 12, 2007 2:38 AM
Reminds me of that Prince lyric. "I've got a lion in my pocket and baby it's ready to roar".
Prince, managed, without the, superfluous, comma, though.
Posted by:Rob Hobson on May 14, 2007 7:51 PM
I though it was a paedophilia awareness campaign until I saw the call to action. Don't get it, poor art direction, crap copy. blah!
Posted by:joeyd345@aol.com on May 21, 2007 1:17 PM
